Friday, November 26, 2010

THANK YOU SO MUCH~! :)

Jane-ah~ and the writer~ haha :D
TO ALL MY READERS, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING MY 1ST FANFIC, EVEN THOUGH IT'S NOT GOOD, I TRIED MY BEST TO WRITE THIS. THANK YOU FOR APPRECIATING SUCH STORY AS THIS. :)


AND MANY THANKS TO THE FOLLOWING:

  

 
 
 
 
 

 

Ms. Cristy Anne Yee
Ms. Kris Bonifacio 


IM SORRY IF I DIDNT MENTION OTHERS, BUT I GIVE YOU MY THANKS. :)


PLEASE LOOK FORWARD FOR MY NEXT FANFICS~! GOMAWO~ ^^

OH! My Baby♥ FINALE

Jane went to the coffee vending machine where Dongho told her that he’ll wait for her. That was the best thing she heard during her stay to korea.

Jane: Tss~ You’ve been the witness to my foolishness. I guess its time to say goodbye. You hold the best memory I have here. Aish, im so stupid.. Talking to the coffee vending machine.

Jane looked at her watch.

Jane: Time to go now coffee. Anyeong..

Jane took a deep breath, she’s trying to keep her tears from falling. She turns at the other side of the street. She was surprised and shocked to what she saw. It was Dongho, standing still, looking at her with tears in his eyes. They are both looking at each other from the other sides of the street. Dongho slowly walked towards her.

Jane: wha….what are you… I….I….

Before she can say anything else, Dongho pulled her hand and hugged her tight. Jane was stunned. She can’t move because Dongho was hugging her so tight.

Dongho: I’ve been looking for you every where, I started losing hope….that…. I’ll never see you again….but… I found you… Jane-ah, mianhae…..Jeongmal minahae…. (Im really sorry)
Jane: Let me go… Please.. I beg you… Please leave… Let me go… Jebal…..Jebal…. (Please.. please….)

Tears from Jane’s eyes started falling. Deep inside, she wants to see Dongho badly. She doesn’t want to leave him. But the pain is hurting her so much. He pushed Dongho away and walked away but Dongho pulled her hand and kissed her on the lips. Jane froze and didn’t move an inch. Dongho was holding on her waist tightly so she can’t push him away. All of a sudden, the rain pours from the skies. Dongho held Jane’s face and told her

Dongho: I know it doesn’t make any sense to you but…..I love you Jane-ah… I love you…
Jane: I…..I love you too Dongho…. So much…….

Dongho kissed her again, but this time, Jane kissed him back.

Dongho: Saranghae~
Jane: Nadeul saranghae~ saranghaneunde… (I love you too; you’re the only one I love)

Dongho Hugged Jane tight with a smile on his face. Jane was so happy too. She never thought that this day would come to her life. It wasn’t reality to her.

Jane: Dongho ya~
Dongho: Hmmm?
Jane: Let go, were so wet.
Dongho: Who cares? Let’s stay like this… Let me hug you as much as I want.
Jane: Ohh come on.
Dongho: Please?
Jane: Ya! Let go or I’ll leave.
Dongho: Mwo?! Ok, I’ll let go…

Jane held Dongho’s hands and looked him in his eyes.

Jane: Don’t worry, from now on, you can hug me as much as you like when were together, ok? But for now, let’s dry ourselves.
Dongho: Jinja? (Really?)
Jane: Ne~
Dongho: Okays then, let’s go~

They both smiled to each other as they walked away holding each others hands.

--THE END--

Thursday, November 25, 2010

*SECTION 20: FINALE PART 1*

Jane went to her friends to say goodbye. She doesn’t want to go without seeing them. She doesn’t want leave them because they were precious to her, but she has no choice.

Yui: Jane-ah~ do you really have to leave?
Rymm: What about us?
Kris: Unnie ah~ do you have to do this?
Jane: Mianhae guys, I just…..I don’t belong here. This isn’t my world. Thank you so much for everything guys. Thank you for being my family here. I love you all.
Rymm: we’ll miss you unnie…
Kris: Please take care of yourself.
Yui: Call us everyday okay?
Jane: Ne~ I will.. I need to go now.
Kris: But, you still have an hour before your flight.
Rymm: Yea, why are you leaving already?
Jane: I…I need to go somewhere before I leave.
Yui: To dongho?
Jane: Ofcourse not.
Yui: are you really leaving without saying goodbye to him?
Jane: What’s the point of saying goodbye to a person who is the reason why im leaving?
Rymm: unnie ahh~
Jane: I need to go now. Bye guys~

Jane hugged her friends and left with teary eyes. After Jane left, Yui’s phone rings.

Yui: Yobusayo?
Xander: Yui-ah where’s jane?
Yui: she already left oppa, wae?
Xander: she left?! Oh my, I’ll call you back yui-ah~
Yui: okay oppa.

Xander called dongho.

Dongho: Hyung!
Xander: Dongho-ya, she already left.

Dongho hanged up the phone and run to the airport. He looked all over the airport for Jane but there are lots of people. He’s losing hope. He thought that Jane might be at her plane now. He looked for the last time but his phone ringed.

Dongho: Yobosayo?
Xander: Dongho-ya, Yui told me that Jane went somewhere else. She’s not in the airport. Its an hour before his flight
Dongho: Mwo? Where could she be?
Xander: I don’t know, her friends don’t know either
Dongho: Okay hyung. Thank you so much. I’ll look for her.

Dongho left the airport and looked for Jane. He doesn’t have any idea where Jane could be. He already looked for her everywhere but he can’t find her. He slowed down because he’s really tired. He tried to call Jane but her phone was still off.

Dongho: Its over…..i wont see her again….I….I never had the chance to say…..How much I….. How much I like her…..

Dongho shed a tear, he lost all his hopes. He walked blankly on the sidewalk, not knowing where to go. He don’t know what to do, he felt like his heart is breaking apart. He’s out of his mind. He kept walking and ignoring people.

Dongho: I…. I guess I should go home now… Jane-ah…. Im sorry….

He looked down for a bit then looked at the other side of the street. His eyes opened widely to what he saw. It was Jane, in front of the Coffee vending machine where he bought the coffee the night he promised Jane that he’ll wait for her. Tears fall to his eyes.

PLEASE WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER~! =)

Sunday, November 21, 2010

*SECTION 19*

Dongho received a phone call someone. He hurriedly went to a coffee shop where they’ll meet. He arrived and greeted the person who called him

Dongho: *Bows 90 degrees* Anyeonghaseyo, sunbaenim.
Heechul: Ohh…you came. Take a seat.
Dongho: Ne, thank you.
Heechul: You want something to drink?
Dongho: no, its ok.
Heechul: by the way, if your wondering where I got your number, I got it from Xander.
Dongho: Ohh…xander hyung..
Heechul: Well, I won’t beat around the bush Dongho, im here to ask you about Jane.
Dongho: Sunbae, how did you….?
Heechul: I was the one who took care of Jane when she was hurt and depress because of you.
Dongho: I…I don’t understand it.. How could it be that I was the reason of her depression? I never hurt her… I never intend to…

Heechul told Dongho the whole story. Dongho was really shocked and he realized that he was wrong. He remembered that day he told Jane that he’ll be waiting for her. He feels very guilty.

Dongho: I…..i betrayed her. i…..broke my promise…im a jerk! I hurt her so much…
Heechul: Yes you are.
Dongho: But, sunbae, it’s not like that, she don’t understand, it’s not what she thinks it is!
Heechul: She was crying to me that day, soaked with the rain.. so I approached her. From that day, I started caring for her. She was like a sister to me.
Dongho: I never intended to hurt her.
Heechul: Save your explanation for Jane.
Dongho: What do you mean sunbae?
Heechul: You still have 2 hours catch her.
Dongho: Catch her? What do you mean sunbae? Where is she going?
Heechul: She’s going back to the Philippines, and she’s planning to leave for good, which means she might not come back.
Dongho: Wha….what about me? Is she going to leave me? Just like that?! Without saying a word to me?!
Heechul: She said that it’s very hard and painful for her every time she sees you.  
Dongho: No she can’t leave…! I need to find her.!
Heechul: You should go now or you might never see her again.
Dongho: Thank you so much sunbaenim. Thank you…
Heechul: Go now, you don’t have much time left.

Dongho hurriedly left and look for Jane. He was running everywhere just to find her. He tried to call her but her phone is off. He went to her apartment but Jane already left as her tenant said. He called Xander.

Xander: Yeobosayo?
Dongho: Hyung!
Xander: Dongho ya~ Wae? Why are you panting? Are you running?
Dongho: Hyung! I don’t have much time left, ill just explain it to you later.
Xander: Why?! What do you want me to do?
Dongho: Please call Yui noona.
Xander: Huh? Yui? Why?
Dongho: Ask her if she knows where Jane is.
Xander: Jane? Why? What happened again?!
Dongho: I need to talk to her. I need to clarify things to her. She’s leaving Korea and going back to the Philippines for good.
Xander: What?! Philippines?!
Dongho: Ne~ Hyung please help me, I want to see her.
Xander: Ok, I’ll call you back after I call Yui. Ok?
Dongho: thanks hyung~!

Dongho kept running, hoping he’ll see Jane somewhere. He keeps looking every where.

Dongho: Jane-ah~! Where could you be?

PLEASE WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER~! =)

Saturday, November 20, 2010

*SECTION 18*

As Jane walk away from Dongho, Heechul was watching from a distance. Jane was continuously walking and didn’t notice that she bumped into Heechul.

Jane: *bows* Sorry..

Heechul grabbed her hand to stop her from leaving. Jane looked up and she was surprised that it was Heechul.

Jane: *wipes her tears* Ohh…Oppa… mianhae, I though it was….
Heechul: So, it was him?
Jane: Ne?
Heechul: Shin Dongho.
Jane: ohh…ne…
Heechul: Good choice. He’s way too cute!
Jane: Oppa…!
Heechul: Im sorry, I was just joking. Let’s go.

Dongho was still in shocked to what he heard. His phone rings.

Dongho: Yeobosayo?
Xander: Dongho ya~ where are you?
Dongho: Im….somewhere….hospital…..
Xander: Come here quikly, I need to tell you something.
Dongho: o….ok…

Dongho left the hospital and went to their practice room. Yui told Xander the whole story about Jane. Xander decided to tell Dongho. The door opened and it was Dongho.

Xander: There you are, ive been looking all over for you.
Dongho: What was that thing that you’ll tell me, tell it quick, im not in the mood.
Xander: YA! What’s with the attitude! Im still your hyung!
Dongho: Mianhae, Hyung.. im  just…. *sighs*
Xander: Dongho ya, what’s wrong?
Dongho: Jane…She hates me…
Xander: You saw her? What happened? What did she said?
Dongho: She said that I don’t deserve her love and she doesn’t want to see me ever again. She was really mad
Xander: Dong ya~ you don’t understand, Jane is…
Dongho: Hyung~ I’ve heard enough…. I don’t want to talk about it anymore.
Xander: But Dongho, you have to listen to this. Jane is..
Dongho: There’s nothing to explain! As I’ve said, I’ve heard enough.
Xander: Dongho ya~!
Dongho: if that would be all, I’ll be going now.
Xander: Dongho ya~! Dongho ya~!

Xander tried to stop Dongho from leaving but he turned around and left without listening to what Xander is trying to tell him. Dongho was walking down the streets, blankly. He keeps walking without direction.

Dongho: Tss! I haven’t done anything wrong to her, and then suddenly, she’ll just say those words to me?! Who does she think she is! Aish! Jinja! But what is she doing at the hospital? Was she sick? I don’t deserve her love?! Fine! She doesn’t deserve mine either! Aish!!! It bothers me! I better stop thinking about it!

*PHONE RINGS*

Dongho: Xander hyung, I already told you that……
ohh…..Sunbaenim…..
ne….
im walking……
ne……
where…..?
ne sunbaenim, I understand….
Ne……
Im on my way……

PLEASE WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER~! =)

Thursday, November 18, 2010

*SECTION 17*

Yui, Kris and Rymm were at their practice room. They continued training for them to be a girl group and be promoted in the future, and unfortunately, Jane couldn’t join them because of her situation. They took a break and talked about Jane.

Rymm: Do you think Jane unnie would be ok after all that happened to her?
Kris: I wish she will.
Yui: Of course she will. She’s strong.

Suddenly, their phone beeps.

From: Kibum oppa
               Kris, are you free today? Can we go out?
From: Kevin oppa
               Rymm, are you busy? Can you come over?
From: Xander oppa
               Yui-ah, im hungry. Please feed me!! Haha

Yui: Should we go?
Rymm: How about Jane unnie? We told her we’ll be back today.
Kris: We could come to her after. And besides, its our chance to tell Dongho what happened to Jane unnie.

The girls left their practice room and went home separately. Yui cooked Xander’s favorite adobo, Rymm brought bi bim bap (Mixed rice vegetables) Bowls and chopsticks, and kris bought drinks and snacks. They all went to UKISS’ practice room.

Kevin: Oh! You guys came!
Kibum: Hey guys!
Xander: My adobo! I can smell it from here!
Yui: Oppa we brought foods for everyone.
Kris: Lunch and snacks
Rymm: and drinks!
Xander: Come on let’s eat!

All of them ate together, they mind their own foods while chit chatting with everyone. Suddenly, Dongho noticed something.

Dongho: Yui noona, where’s Jane? Haven’t she arrived?
Yui: Ahh,, Jane-Ah, she’s….
Kris: She’s in the hospital.
Dongho: MWO?! Hospital?! Why?! What happened?!
Rymm: I think you should see it for yourself.
Dongho rushed into the hospital that Kris told him. When he arrived at the hospital, He saw Jane came out in a room. He hurriedly runs into her.

Dongho: Jane-ah! What happened?! Are you ok?! Tell me!
Jane: What are you doing here? How did you…..
Dongho: Its not important, tell me what happened to you!
Jane: Im fine, I’ll be going home now. Excuse me.
Dongho: Jane~ah! Why are you acting like this? What’s the matter with you?!
Jane: Just let me leave..,
Dongho: Jane-ah, why are you like this? Have I done anything wrong to you?! Tell me!
Jane: I shouldn’t have liked you from the start…
Dongho: Jane-ah, I don’t get it! What are you trying to say?!
Jane: Just go back being Dongho…Just forget you ever met me, i…..i don’t want to see you again…ever.. so please…just let me be…you…..don’t deserve my love…

Dongho was startled to what he heard. Jane walked away from him. As she turns around, tears started falling from her eyes. It was really painful for her to see Dongho and say those words to him, but she has no choice.

Jane: “as I walk away from you, I will never look back again until the pain you’ve caused me faded away from my heart.. But I don’t know if it would be possible…you hurt me so badly… Shin Dongho….”

PLEASE WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER~! =)

Monday, November 15, 2010

*SECTION 16*

Jane fainted and was brought to the hospital by Heechul. He grabbed her phone to call someone on her phonebook. He contacted Yui, Rymm, and Kris. They arrived in the hospital in a few minutes. They saw Heechul outside.

Kris: Oppa, what happened to unnie?
Heechul: She fainted.
Yui: Why?
Heechul: I don’t know it yet, maybe you should ask the doctor.

They looked for the doctor assigned to Jane. They found him a he came out from the emergency room.

Heechul: Doctor, what happened? Is she Ok now?
Doctor: Well, she’s good now. She’s stable.
Yui: What happened to her?
Doctor: Her vitals went down because of the High fever and too much stress, causing her to breakdown. Is she under depression?
Yui: Well, she just arrived from the Philippines. We don’t have any idea.
Doctor: Well, you need to make sure that she takes a rest and avoid things that will make her stress. And she should eat healthy food to make her gain her strength again.
Heechul: we’ll do, thanks doctor.

As the doctor walked away, the 3 girls asked Heechul more further to what really happened. He told them the whole story. They went to Jane’s room and saw her sleeping. They feel very sad about her because she really look sick and very pale. They saw Jane move and opened her eyes, so they approached to her.

Yui: Jane-Ah, Are you ok?
Rymm: Are you still sick?
Kris: How do you feel?
Jane: I’m quite ok guys, im sorry I didn’t tell you that I came. Im sorry…
Heechul: Jane-Ah, don’t force yourself, take a rest first. Girls, can you let her rest first?
Yui: Yea, I think we should, were sorry oppa, we’ll just come here again ok? Take a rest first.
Jane: Ok guys~ im sorry I troubled you..
Kris: No unnie~ its ok, were here for you.
Rymm: take care okays~ were going bye~!

They left the room and let Jane to take some rest. Heechul was left with Jane.

Heechul: Oh, I should be going too, but, do you want me to stay here for a bit?
Jane: Aniyo, oppa, I’ve caused too much trouble to you. You can go now. I’m sorry.
Heechul: Don’t say that, you’re not causing any trouble to me.
Jane: Thank you oppa, than you for everything.
Heechul: Its ok… Don’t mind it Jane-ah~ As long as you feel ok, im happy.

Jane was really happy that he met Heechul that day she was crying. He felt a brotherly care to him. He smiled and started crying.

Heechul: Ya, what’s wrong? Why are you crying?
Jane: Nothing oppa, im just…really happy I found you…You were like a brother to me.
Heechul: im also happy I met you, I felt like I found a little sister to cuddle with.

The both of them smiled at each other. At least, Jane forgot about Dongho that time. She smiled and filled with Joy.

PLEASE WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER~! =)